有的小伙伴一直搞不明白为什么拿不到雅思写作高分，明明文章内容，条例逻辑之类的都非常有高分风范，但是事实总是打脸。其实易世英语老师想说，有可能，你第一步就踏错了！用上这几种雅思写作开头，高分就与你无缘啦！
一、中式英语
用中式英文开头，不仅考官看不懂，还暴露了你的语言功底，语料积累匮乏可是雅思写作中的大忌。比如：
写作主题 1
The happiest moment in your life
案例：In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……
写作主题 2
The population problem
案例：The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.
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二、乱译中国俗语
胡乱翻译中国俗语会起反作用，毕竟考官对中国俗语并不“感冒”，不仅不懂还会引起考官反感。比如：
写作主题 1
Is it good to have a large family?
案例：I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……
写作主题 2
Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?
案例：Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……
三、超级啰嗦
开篇就要主题明了清晰，上来就啰啰嗦嗦表达不清，考官自然认为你的观点模糊，甚至不会表达。比如：
写作主题 1
Should college students be allowed to get married?
案例：This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……
四、偏离主题
文不对题自然会扣分，给考官留下跑题的印象，想想你的写作分数还会高么？比如：
写作主题
It is said that nowadays one can‘t acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
案例：I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.
以上几种雅思写作开头，就需要大家在考试的时候避开了。对于雅思写作还有任何学习问题，欢迎来咨询易世英语老师哟~
